Saturday, August 4, 2012

The Elves' Riddle

Okay. So, this is where I am in my writing: Dakota and her group of people are outside the gates of Polarya, the elven kingdom. (Is the name Polarya a little too weird? It's pronounced Poh-lar-ee-yuh) To get inside, they must solve a riddle. Problem is, I can't think of a riddle! :) Here's the poem that is on the gates:


Many beings seek us out
Believing their motives are wise.
But we, as a people, have many doubts
As to whether they're wanting a prize.

If you, traveling strangers, can solve this next rhyme,
Within the next hour or two,
We'll let you come in and spend here some time,
If not, we will come there for you.

I hope it doesn't sound too cheesy. I mean, the elves are supposed to be these wise, strong creatures that are experts at practically everything relating to arts, you know, writing, music, poetry. I'm not that good at poetry, sooo....

But anyway, the next riddle has to rhyme, according to the first line of the second section. I wish it didn't have to, but I couldn't think of anything else to say for the poem. :)

I'm drawing a blank as to what to say for the riddle, so I'm open to any suggestions, comments, concerns, or your riddles! Remember it has to be wise-sounding. Sort of. Elvish. :)

4 comments:

  1. I awful at poetry too. I so take my hat off to anyone who can make a few words match together!! When I get stuck like that, sometimes I just redo the "problem section". So the poem. Maybe just rewrite the second stanza and not make the next riddle have to rhyme? Good luck with this! Sounds like a tough one!! :]

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  2. Cait, that's probably what I'll end up doing. :) Or just getting rid of the whole poem thing and having a sentry meet them! :)

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  3. I could maybe come up with something if you tell me the answer to the riddle. ;-)
    - Grace

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  4. I wish I was better at riddles so I could help. But I am so very very bad at them. I think I would only make things worse.
    I hope you can figure it out though. It is so hard hitting a spot like that and being unable to move on without that one part.

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